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Using gender-neutral language

Most of us do not consider ourselves to be sexist. However, sexist language is hard to avoid – historically, English is riddled with it.

For example, “mankind”, “the man in the street” and “chairman” may all be seen as offensive because they disregard the female half of humanity, and are becoming less and less acceptable. While not always obvious or easy to pick up, such terms can immediately alienate or irritate a gender-conscious reader.

Some problems are quickly remedied. For example, “mankind” is easily changed to “humankind”; “the man in the street” to “the person in the street” or “the average person”, and so on. Avoid sexist idioms – such as “the world and his wife” – where possible.

Many ungendered phrases or terms such as “chairperson” may seem awkward at first; but they are rapidly becoming the standard. Remember that English is evolving all the time, and a word like “personhole” (instead of “manhole”), which might seem excessive and unwieldy to us now, may be more widely used in the future.

Perhaps the most pervasive problem is the assumption that the representative person is male. For example: “If a client wants to change his account, he must visit his bank personally;” or: “A confident person can talk his way out of any situation.” There are several ways around this problem.

For example:

“Every student must hand in his essay before the set date.”

  1. Try using the plural form: “All students must hand in their essays before the set date.”
  2. Put the sentence into the passive case: “Every essay must be handed in before the set date.”
  3. Or you can even use a mix of plural and singular: “Every student must hand in their essay before the set date.” This form, with its mix of singular (student) and plural (their) forms, is incorrect according to conventional grammar; but it is gaining acceptance. Use it only when you can't think of a better way to phrase the sentence.

Avoid unconscious sexist stereotyping. An example:

“Buy her flowers on Secretaries' Day.” Secretaries are not always female, nor are their bosses necessarily male. Similarly, nurses can be men, and doctors women.

These adjustments may seem small; but their impact is great. If you take some care to make your writing gender-neutral (i.e. equally applicable to men and women), it will be more accessible to more people. Further, it will demonstrate that you are aware of the sensitive issues involved. Your thoughtfulness will be noted and appreciated by the majority of your readers.

What's wrong with these sentences? Try to rewrite them in gender-neutral language.

  1. There's someone in every class who likes to keep himself to himself.
  2. Every Tom, Dick or Harry in town had to express his opinion.
  3. How many man-hours were spent cleaning up after the conference?
  4. Often, chairmen don't treat cleaning ladies with much respect.

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